snene opens bacon man in a hospital he says[COLOR=red]voodoo i see what u said and know it is my turn as you see im in a hospital now voodoo im not dead or scared but i know i am ready to beat your butt at this house show and when i do you will wish u were dead in this match i will let all of my anger out on you voodoo u say i got a dumb name look at yours vooodoo also i am a face but tonight i will be a heel when iam done with you you will be in this hospital just like stacey you take her down i am gonna take you down[COLOR=gray]camrea fades but then it comes back on and bacon man has a chair and this doll aith voodoos face and starts hitting it and hitting it then he goes on the chair makes the sighn and he does the baconburner[COLOR=red]that is what is going to happen to you[COLOR=gray]camera goes off for good
Damn Bacon Man you've improved, but let me tell you something. When your finished with your description kind of space it down two lines and start talking. When your finished talking and you want to do description again. Then space it down two lines. Also try to use colors so it will look more interesting and people will really want to read you rps. Bacon Man do as I said and trust me, other superstars will be more interested.
If you don't know what I mean then let me show you.
snene opens bacon man in a hospital he says
Bacon Man: voodoo i see what u said and know it is my turn as you see im in a hospital now voodoo im not dead or scared but i know i am ready to beat your butt at this house show and when i do you will wish u were dead in this match i will let all of my anger out on you voodoo u say i got a dumb name look at yours vooodoo also i am a face but tonight i will be a heel when iam done with you you will be in this hospital just like stacey you take her down i am gonna take you down
camrea fades but then it comes back on and bacon man has a chair and this doll aith voodoos face and starts hitting it and hitting it then he goes on the chair makes the sighn and he does the baconburner
Bacon Man: that is what is going to happen to you
camera goes off for good