Ok, I am writing a story. It's just some lame Comedy/Adventure/Romance/More Comedy kind of thing..
I don't know what to call it. I have been just calling it the Loop-Loo Story. This part is pretty boring.. I will try to post it as often as I can, cuz I am still writing most of it. Soo Here we go!

Loopy-Loo Story

Chapter I

[knock knock knock]

Me : [Opens door] Alexandria!!

Lex : Hey! What’s up?

Me : Nothing really.. You?

Lex : Same..

Me : Well I guess we should wait for everyone else?

Lex : Yup..

[knock knock]

Me : [opens door..again] Oh crap! Sorry Tony! We locked you out!

(Tony is Alexandria aka Lex’s cousin)

Tony : Suuuurre.

Me : Shut up!

Tony : Meena’s here too.

Me : Coolness! Hey Meena!

Meena : Heylo!

[knock knock]

Me : Dammit! We need a doorbell!! Oh! Hey Bre, hey Veronica!

Ron : Hi!

Bre : Hey!

(Ron is Veronica for short)

Me : Let’s get this party started!!

[knock knock]

Me : That is it!!! [opens door] What do you want?!?!

I'll look forward to the next segment :)

Oooooook!! Chapter II!

Chapter II

Me : That is it!!! [opens door] What do you want?!?!

Santa : Ho ho hey!! Me and my friends are back!!

Me : Nooooooo!!!!!!

Lex : Uhm.. Why is Santa here?

Me : Followed me from a Green Day website..

Tony : Why would Santa be at a Green Day website?

Me : Because he was going to help Fiona, and I carry out our evil vengeance on Billie-Joe. Com!! MUAH HAHAHAHA!!

Bre : What the…?

Me : [sigh] Nothing!

Ron : Holy crap!! Ninjas!!!

Ninja Dad : Hiiiii-YA!!!

Bre : Ahhh!!!! [hides behind Ron]

Ninja Son : Dad!! Come on!!!!

Me : Oh hey Adam!!!

Adam : Hey!

Me : Everyone, this is Adam. He is the ninja son.. Adam this is Lex..

Lex : Hi!

Me : and Meena..

Meena : Hey!

Me : And Bre..

Bre : Hiya!

Me : And Ron and Tony..

Ron : Hi!

Tony : Sup?

Adam : Nice to meet you all..

Me : Anyways.. Santa,why are you here?

Santa : You’ll find out soon enough..

Tony : Uhhhmmm

Ron : [whispers to Bre] I never knew Santa was so creepy!

Bre : [not listening to Ron] Yay!!! Santa!!!

~ 1 hour Later ~

Santa : I am bored like hell!

Ron : Santa! Watch your language!!

Santa : Ho ho oh! Right!

Me : I have an evil.. I mean fun idea!! Let’s play truth or dare!!

that's funny becca!

Thank you!

Chapter III

Me : I have an evil.. I mean fun idea!! Let’s play truth or dare!!

Lex : Nooooo!!!!

Everyone except Lex : O.o

Lex : Hahaha! Just kidding!

Me : Ooookay.. Anyways.. Who want to go first?

Mysterious voice : I do! I do!

[Everyone turns to see……Sam, my Chihuahua]

Me : Holy crap! Sam you talk???

Mysterious voice : No you idiot! Over here!

[Everyone turns to the person that was ACTUALLY talking to

see…..Larry , my nieces’ dead hamster!]

Lex, Bre, Meena, Tony : Ewww!!! Zombie Hamster!

Ron : Cool!!

Me : Ahhh!!! [starts screaming and crying]

(What can I say? Zombies freak the shit out of me!!)

Mysterious voice : NO!!! Gahhh!!!! Over here!!

Me : [stops screaming and crying]

[We all turn, again, to see…… Ron Weasley!!!]

Me : OMFG!!! Ron!!

Ron : Huh?

Other Ron : What the..?

Me : Ron WEASLEY I think you should leave… Your confusing everyone

about who is the Veronica ~ Ron and who is Ron Weasley..

Ron : Suuurre! I bet you’d let Harry stay!

Me : Hell yes I would! I mean.. uhm.. No.. I mean yes.. Well I

dunno.. Why? Is he here? Ahh!!

Ron : Nope.. He said he had to meet somebody.. It was weird.

Hermione said she was meeting someone too..

Veronica : Ron, you’re an idiot..

Ron : Why?

Meena : Just get out!

Ron : Fine!! [leaves]

Me : Ron can be such a baby! [changes voice to baby voice to mock

Ron] Wah, wah, wah! I’m Ron Weasley and I’m dirt poor! Wah!! I love

Hermione but she loooves Harry and I’m too dumb to see it! Wahh!!

[changes voice back to normal]

Everyone : Lol!!

Tony : Anyways..Back to truth or dare..

Me : Right!

Lex : Ok..Santa! Truth or dare?

Santa : Dare baby! Bring. It. On!!!

Lex : I dare you and Ninja Dad to.....

Lex : Ok..Santa! Truth or dare?

Santa : Dare baby! Bring. It. On!!!

Lex : I dare you and Ninja Dad to leave and not come back til
tomorrow to pick up Adam after our sleep over!

Santa : I’ll take your dare! C’mon Ninja Dad!! [leaves with Ninja Dad]

Tony : Ok! Let’s start for real! Adam.. truth or dare?

Adam : Uhmm.. I’m kinda scared but….dare!

Tony : MUAH HAHAHAHA!! I dare you to.. kiss Becca!

Me : :o [speechless & shocked]

Adam : Ok!

Me : :o [still speechless and shocked]

Adam : [Grabs me, kisses me, then lets me go]

Me : :o [speechless & even more shocked] W-What just happened?

Adam : [winks at me]

Adam : Ok..Uhm..Bre! Truth or dare?

Bre : Truth.

Adam : Ok, is it true that… you were making googlie eyes at Ron
before he left?

Bre : [blushing] No!!

Meena : Yeah right! Bre loves Ron! Bre Loves Ron!!

Bre : [chases Meena]

Meena : Ahh!! Help I’m being attacked by a RON LOVER!!

Bre : RRRROOOOOOAAAAAARRRR!!!!

Lex : Holy crap! That was a scary roar!

Tony : Seriously..

Bre : [stops chasing Meena] Ok..Lex. Truth or Dare??

Lex : Truth.

Me : [cough] chicken! [cough]

Lex : Shut up!

Bre : Ok… Is it true that you went out with Frankenstein?

Meena : What kind of lame ass question is that? Of course she never
went out with Frankenstein!

Me : I think she’s talking about Andrew.

Meena : Ohhh… Eww! He was like Frankenstein!!

Me : [falls to floor laughing]

Lex : Well.. about that.. It was part of a deal.. I only agreed to do it
so Tony could go out with Clorinda!!

(Clorinda is Andrew’s sister.. He is like 15 and Clorinda is our age.. 13)

Me : Uh huh! Suuurreee…[rolls eyes]

Lex : I’m serious!!

Tony : Riiiiight!

Lex : ARGH! Shut up! Ok.. Ron.. Truth or Dare?

Ron : Uhhmmm… Dare!

Lex : I dunno any dares..

That's interesting. I think you need to work on writing script style stories a little more...but it's pretty humorous.

Thanx for the conductive criticism, if thats what t's called. I know the writing is pretty weird but I usually don't write like that. Oh and I know that it is hard to say so many nice things, so you can just tell me to post whenever with out having to say anything... Yeah.

Lex : ARGH! Shut up! Ok.. Ron.. Truth or Dare?

Ron : Uhhmmm… Dare!

Lex : I dunno any dares..

Chad Michael Murray : I know!

Lex : [faints from the affects of Chad’s total sexiness!]

Me : [drools]

Chad : I dare you to..Oh shit I forgot!…..Wait! I got it! I dare you to
jump off the Golden Gate Bridge!!

Me : [wipes drool] We are NOT driving to San Francisco!

Chad : Aww! Why not!

Tony : Chad..

Chad : What?

Tony : Shut the hell up!

Chad : [Starts to cry]

Ron : [puts on military uniform and talks like a boot camp instructors
voice] Stop crying you girlie man!!! Drop and give me 50!!!

Chad : [drops to give Ron “50”] 1-2-3……4…………5………………6 [faints]

Ron : [mumbling] Loser…

Meena : Uhhh… Where did you get that uniform?

Ron : I got it from over there [points to trunk]

Meena : Whoa! That’s the mythical Trunk of Uniformness! I have
been searching for this all of my life!!

Bre : O.o Really?

Meena : Pssh! Yeah!!

Me : Let’s open it! [opens trunk and finds……

lol. ok.

Meena : Uhhh… Where did you get that uniform?

Ron : I got it from over there [points to trunk]

Meena : Whoa! That’s the mythical Trunk of Uniformness! I have been searching for this all of my life!!

Bre : O.o Really?

Meena : Pssh! Yeah!!

Me : Let’s open it! [opens trunk and finds……Voldemort!!!]

Everyone : o.O Ahhhhh!!!!!!

Mysterious Voice : Just as I suspected!

[Everyone turns and sees Albus Dumbledore!]

(This is where my HP love and nerdy-ness comes into play!)

Me : Why is Voldemort in a mythical, but still real trunk? What did you
suspect?

Dumbledore : Voldemort is hiding in there, because it was in your
prophecy! And I suspected that Voldemort would be in a house in California, in a trunk, hiding from Harry Potter!!

Me : I have a prophecy?!?! And you suspected all that and never told
Harry?!?!

Dumbledore : Yes and yes.

Tony : What is Becca’s proph-a-muh-bobber?

Dumbledore : I forgot, but your supposed to marry Harry.

Me : What? J

Adam : What? L

Dumbledore : Yup….

Meena : Uhm.. Okay…?

Me : Ok.. Enough truth or dare! Let’s listen to some music! [turns on
stereo and starts to sing along]

Are you listening. (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

Sing it back. (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)



String from your tether unwinds.

(string from your tether unwinds, Whoa oh, Whoa oh)

Up and outward to bind

(Up and outward to bind, Whoa oh, Whoa oh)

I was spinning free (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

with a little sweet and simple numbing me



Are you listening? (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

Sing it back. (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

So tell me what do I need (tell me what do I need, Whoa oh, Whoa
oh)

When words lose their meaning (When words lose their meaning)
(Whoa oh, Whoa oh)

I was spinning free (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

with a little sweet and simple numbing me

Yeah, stumble till you crawl (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

Sinking into sweet uncertainty



Are you listening? Are you listening?

If you're listening (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

If you're listening, Are you listening?

Sing it back (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

If you're listening, Are you listening?

I'm still running away

I'm still running away, whoa oh, whoa oh

Won't play your hide and seek game.

I was spinning free (Whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

with a little sweet and simple numbing me.

What a dizzy dance (whoa,oh,oh,oh,oh,oh)

This sweetness will not be concerned with me.

No the sweetness will not be concerned with me

Everyone : [stares at me]

Me : What?

Lex : What the heck was that!?

Me : What was what?

Meena : Becca, your weird..

Me : Why? ‘Cause I sang along?

Bre : No, we were just trying to confuse you..

Me : Ohhhh…

Chad : [wakes up]

Meena : You should leave.. Now!

Chad : [leaves, accidentally bumping into Dumbledore]

Ron : Uhm.. Dumbledore… Why are you still here?

Dumbledore : Because...

I am enjoying this Becca. It's realy good! Keep it up.

Here it is --->

Ron : Uhm.. Dumbledore… Why are you still here?

Dumbledore : Because Becca has to come back with me to Hogwarts!

Me : WTF?!?! No!

Dumbledore : Yes! You have to! You have to save the wizarding world!

Me : How come it’s not the witching world??

Dumbledore : ‘Cause wizards are better!

Me : Oh no you didn’t!! [makes fist, ready to punch Dumbledore]

Dumbledore : Okay! Sorry!! But we are going.. Now! [grabs me and
apparates to the Ministry of Magic]

Adam : Noooooo!!!!! [grabs me, apparating with me and Dumbledore]

~ At the Ministry of Magic ~

Me : Whoa… This is the Ministry?

Dumbledore : Yup..

Adam : Cool!!

Me : Adam?!?! How did you get here?

Adam : I apparated with you..

Me : Can YOU say clingy? Geez..

Adam : *tear*

Dumbledore : C’mon.. We’re going to Hogwarts….

~ Later At Hogwarts ~

Me : Well this sucks! We’ve been sitting in the kitchen for the last
hour!

Adam : [through mouth full of food] Fe gwet foo keat!

Me : O.o What?

Adams : [swallows food] We get to eat!

Me : [shakes head pitifully] Typical boy..

[door opens and in comes Dumbledore]

Me : WHY DID YOU LEAVE US HERE YOU CRAZY OLD MONKEY?!?!?!

Dumbledore : Because I can! [crosses arms over chest and sticks out
tongue at me]

Adam : Cut it out you two!!

Me : Humph!

Dumbledore : Let’s go.. I want you two to go to classes as usual
today..

Me : Yeah, but one problem..WE DON’T HAVE POWERS!!

Dumbledore : Just pretend..

Adam : How??

Dumbledore : I don’t know.. First class is Potions..with Harry..[winks at
me at the mention of Harry]

Adam : [not a happy camper..Not even a happy hiker!]

~ In Potions Class ~

Me : Let’s sit over there!

Adam : No! You just want to sit next to Harry!

Me : No! He’s not even over there! [goes and sits next to a VERY hot
blonde and starts talking to him, leaving Adam.]

Adam : Who is THAT?

Me : Umm… heh heh heh..That’s we’ll he’s..

Mystery Man : The names Malfoy.. Draco Malfoy..

Me : [giggles]

(A/N : I know giggling is pretty pathetic, but come on! Draco’s hot!)

Adam : The name is Adam. [shakes Draco’s hand]

Snape : [walks in looking evil] Everyone open your damn book and
read!!

Me : Someone needs to pull the stick out!

Snape : [swoops over to my desk] What did you say?

Me : I didn’t say shit!

Snape : Yes you did!

Me : No I said “Someone needs to pull the stick out!” Not “shit”

Adam : [snickers]

Snape : SHUT IT PRETTY BOY!!

Me : Oooooooh!!

Adam : What did you say you grease-assed mother fucker?!?!

Me : Oooh! Rap battle!! Rap battle!.........

lol i'm enjoying this a lot!

*wtf* lol i wasnt expecting that ..... its soooo funny its like im having a weird dream! :blink: :huh: :lol:

Lol! Is that a good thing....? P.S. I started a GD FF. It's online. Here is the link for the first chptrs!!~> My FF <~

Next Chptr :

Snape : SHUT IT PRETTY BOY!!

Me : Oooooooh!!

Adam : What did you say you grease-assed mother fucker?!?!

Me : Oooh! Rap battle!! Rap battle!

[everyone forms a circle around Snape and Adam]

Adam : You call me a pretty boy? Well atleast I’m down. You ain’t nothing but a grease head toucan. You fuck-faced clown!

Everyone : Oooohh!!!

Snape : You think your down? You called me a “fuck-faced clown?”
Well I’ll curse yo ass to China Town!!

Me : Ddddaaaammmmnnnnn! Teach boy got skills!! Ok, not really,
but, whatever..

(A/N : Ok, my rhymes aren’t that good, but play along! I mean I don’t
plan on growing up to be a rapper! I wanna be an architect! Or
musician.. I dunno.. Back to the story! By the way, since they rap
battling, it’s gonna get ghetto! Oh snap!! Lol!)

Adam : Well I thought wit dis rap I tell all muh home dawgs a little about you. Ahem. [clears throat] You can’t teach a class, you smell like ass, you fucked your mom, your boyfriends name is Tom!

The One and Only Harry Potter : [laughing ass off]

Me : Oh! [giggles] Hi Harry!

Harry : Hi! [talks to me, while ignoring rest of rap battle]

Snape : Oh, really now? How about this? You look like ya gay, ya
sniffin the hay, you hair looks like Kid at Play’s!

Adam : Really? Fuck you! How about dis? You-

Me : [cuts off Adam] Your raps? They suck. You get a good one only
wit some luck. This rap? It’s done. I had lots of fun, but sorry, neither of you can out rap me, hun!

Everyone : Ooooohhhh!!! You bitches got served!!

Snape : [goes to cry in his office]

Adam : [pouts]

Me : C’mon Adam..

Adam : No!

Me : C’mon!

Adam : No!

Me : Fine! C’mon Harry!

Harry : Ok.

Malfoy : Nnnnoooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!

~ Later in the Great Hall ~

Me : [stuffing face]

Ron : Hey Becca!

Me : Fhey Fwon!

Hemione : O.o What did you say?

Me : [swallows FOOD] I said. Hey Ron!

Hermione : Are you trying to steal my man?
Me : WTF?! No! Besides, if I did want Ron I wouldn’t have to “try” to steal him from the likes of you!

(A/N : Ooooooooooohhhhh!!!)

Harry : Ooooooooh!

Hermione : Pssh.. Yeah right bitch!

Me : What did you call me you bushy-haired, snaggle-toothed, book-eating, prom queen wanna be? Cuz if you wanna throw down, I’ll kick ya ass right now bitch!!

Hermione : [speechless]

Everyone else in Great Hall : [speechless]

Me : I don’t need magic to kick yo ass!

Adam : [Walks into Great Hall] Ummm…. Did I miss something?

Me : Nope! But, Hermione, YOU JUST GOT SERVED!!

[This is the dawning of the rest of our liiiiiiiives! This is our lives on
hhooollliiiiiddaaaaaaaaaaayyyyy!!!!!]

Me : [answers cell] Hello?.....

lol becca that is brill!
Keep it up!

lmao, i really like reading the next instalments!