Title: Ocean (i'm A Poem Person)
Rock-On-|m| - August 10, 2005 11:07 PM (GMT)
Ocean
Water lashing against the rock.
The sound of the ocean a mumbling talk.
Secrets from the oceans mist.
A bracelet of shells around my wrist.
Sea foam on the water just like lace.
The ocean's spray upon my face.
The sun is rising across the sea.
The smell of the ocean is coming over me.
Beyond the waves is a dolphins profile.
In the sky is the fading night's smile.
The sky is a never ending eternity.
Also is the endless sea.
As the last star fades away,
I know the morning's here to stay.
Becca Helen Abma
Copyright ©2005 Becca Helen Abma
Kirsty - August 10, 2005 11:15 PM (GMT)
Rock-On-|m| - August 10, 2005 11:52 PM (GMT)
Thanx :) Like as the title says, I'm a poem person. I dont know if I am good enough to be called a poet.. lol
billie_joe_lover - August 11, 2005 08:38 AM (GMT)
Thant's really good. Yep you're a poet, you've been given my seal of approval lol!
Rock-On-|m| - August 11, 2005 09:30 AM (GMT)
Kitty-Kat - August 13, 2005 05:15 AM (GMT)
It's very good, not the type of poem that I usually enjoy...but I did enjoy it. And I agree, you are a poet.
<3 Billie Joe <3 - September 2, 2005 11:04 PM (GMT)
That is good!
U R a Poem person :)
in a good way B)
outsider - September 7, 2005 02:29 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kirsty @ Aug 10 2005, 11:15 PM) |
| Another great one! B) |
yea!