Title: The Companion
Description: Tell what ya think
Rock-On-|m| - August 8, 2005 01:44 AM (GMT)
The Companion
To Sam my dog.
Big,staring, brown eyes.
Brown and golden fur.
Head so full of when's and why's.
He is the companion to her.
He's there through thick and thin.
Even through and through.
And I bet that if he was your friend,
He'd be there for you.
Chewing everything.
Jumping around chasing a ball.
Walking around with not a care.
Tail waging and all.
Panting on the hot days.
Curled up on the cold.
She will love him always.
Until they're dead or old.
Becca Helen Abma
Copyright ©2005 Becca Helen Abma
Soooo, what do ya think? Plz tell me if you hate it!
**Good Riddance** - August 8, 2005 05:13 AM (GMT)
that was beautiful! *starts crying* lol
Rock-On-|m| - August 8, 2005 07:43 AM (GMT)
*starts to cry* Now you made me cry too! lol I'm glad you like it though...
billie_joe_lover - August 8, 2005 09:06 AM (GMT)
*passes out the tissues and takes one for herself*
Thats was so lovely, i wish i had a dog now lol!
Rock-On-|m| - August 8, 2005 09:28 AM (GMT)
*takes tissue* thanks! Aww! *runs, buys dog for billie_joe_lover, comes back.* Here ya go! *gives Pamela puppy*

Here's your puppy!
Puppies for everyone!




Yay Puppies!
billie_joe_lover - August 8, 2005 09:31 AM (GMT)
awwww it's sooooo cute. Thanks Becca xx :wub:
Rock-On-|m| - August 8, 2005 09:34 AM (GMT)
*still a bit teary eyed* No problem! Now we can all have puppies, but plz spay and nueter your pets becuz there are WAY too many animals being "put down" in pounds and shelters are over-flowing! *runs and plays with puppies*
**Good Riddance** - August 9, 2005 12:59 AM (GMT)
lol now I wanna go hug my doggy! *goes and hugs smokey* (that's my dog's name)
Rock-On-|m| - August 9, 2005 01:08 AM (GMT)
My mom and I call our Chihuahua Sam "Samuel John" becuz my dad's name is Daniel John and they sound the same. lmao!
Kirsty - August 10, 2005 05:00 PM (GMT)
Thats beautiful, reminds my of the dog I had. I got him when I was 4 and he died when I was 16, will never forget the darling
Rock-On-|m| - August 10, 2005 09:54 PM (GMT)
Sometimes I sing to my dog Sam.. *blushes a little embarassed*
**Good Riddance** - August 10, 2005 10:00 PM (GMT)
Kirsty - August 10, 2005 10:53 PM (GMT)
Dont worry about it, I used to have full conversations with my dog, needless to say they where a little one-sided :rolleyes:
Rock-On-|m| - August 10, 2005 11:04 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kirsty @ Aug 10 2005, 10:53 PM) |
| Dont worry about it, I used to have full conversations with my dog, needless to say they where a little one-sided :rolleyes: |
Lol. I would suppose so. You know if dogs could take they would probably be very smart, cuz they have LOTZ os time to think... lol But I think birds probably swear like me- I mean like sailors.. lol. I had to add the thing about the birds cuz my mom's evil bird is near me like sqwauking her freakin' head off! <_<
Kitty-Kat - August 13, 2005 05:25 AM (GMT)
awesome, and good poem, although there's one thing I would change, I would add 'too' He'd be there for you, right there... I would have it say, 'He'd be there for you too.' but that's just me.
I was wondering two things, 1.) How old are you? and 2.) How long have you been writing poetry?
billie_joe_lover - August 14, 2005 04:25 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kirsty @ Aug 10 2005, 11:53 PM) |
| Dont worry about it, I used to have full conversations with my dog, needless to say they where a little one-sided :rolleyes: |
lol i've been known to do that with my mums cat hehe. At least i am not alone!
**Good Riddance** - August 14, 2005 08:26 PM (GMT)
Kitty-Kat - August 14, 2005 11:24 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (billie_joe_lover @ Aug 14 2005, 04:25 PM) |
| QUOTE (Kirsty @ Aug 10 2005, 11:53 PM) | | Dont worry about it, I used to have full conversations with my dog, needless to say they where a little one-sided :rolleyes: |
lol i've been known to do that with my mums cat hehe. At least i am not alone!
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My sis did that with her cat once....lol