Uhm...I don't have a name for it yet...


Memories come flooding back of loves lost once again
I try to hold you in my arm but all I get is air
I don’t want to feel this way, don’t want to be alone
I just want you in my arms, I still love you though you’re gone
***

You used to be my brother, you were everything to me
But you left, now you’re gone, and your friends won’t leave me be
They talk, they try to help me, they’re doing everything they can
But all they really do my friend is let loose the memories
***

I don’t want you to leave me here, I don’t want you to go
But it’s too late, you’ve left already and now I’m all alone
Please don’t leave me here my love, I can’t stand the pain
Please don’t leave me here my dear, I’ll love you ‘til the end
***

The end draws near but I have no fear, I know I’ll see you again
You are my angel now, my brother, and I’ll soon see you again
I raise the knife to take my life, but soon feel arms around me
I open my eyes and I see a surprise, your love is here to save me
Maladran Zachary

A/N: A little not on how this poem came to be and a little description of what’s going on in case you don’t understand.
Origin: I woke up and walked into the living room and this, like, picture came into my head.. And then these words and I, like, wrote ‘em down and voila, a poem was born. The first one I’ve written in ages so I don’t really know. . .I don’t know, how good it is or whatever.
Storyline: The first stanza is about the boy/girlfriend (it doesn’t really matter which, readers have their choice), of, well the dude I guess, and then the second is the brother of the dude. They alternate. Please R&R.

coolness ^^ its a great poem me likes it

Really? Cool, I'm glad. It's the first poem I've written in quite a while...and my dad actually complimented me on it...it was cool.

wow thats cool

(pardon me but im juz not used to seein parents actually get involved with their kids)

:) Yeah...generally he doesn't read my work but we'd just been talking so I decided to show it to him. He said something about me putting a lot of feeling into it for never having had a boyfriend and being dumped by him...he didn't quite get it but...lol, but guys are guys, the don't get anything.